Planning · ScreenwritingNO.152 / 166
01
When to use it
The first shot of a short video or short drama; any opening that has to fight for attention in a feed.
02
Prompt template
Design 5 alternative opening hooks for the story below. Each is one concrete shot filmable within 3 seconds plus one line of dialogue or caption, creating a question, anomaly, or crisis, with no backstory. Story: [logline]
03
Sample prompt · ask a chat model
This one is written for chat models like ChatGPT, Claude or Gemini: replace the ideas in brackets with your own and it will help you write the story or revise the script.
Design 5 different opening hooks for the story below. Each is a concrete image that can be shot in under 3 seconds plus one line of dialogue or a caption, creating a question, something abnormal or a crisis, with no background explanation. Mark the one you'd recommend most. Story: a delivery rider who lost his job wants to get back to his hometown on Lunar New Year's Eve, but the last long-distance bus has already left. Vertical 9:16, 60 seconds in total.
04
Common pitfalls
- The opening gives background and introduces the characters first, and nothing happens in 3 seconds.
- A hook that has nothing to do with the film, so viewers feel cheated.
- Too many messy hooks, with no clear focus.
05
Parameter tips
The first shot is the event itself; use pictures rather than captions when you can; the hook must be answered by the end.