Planning · ScreenwritingNO.154 / 166
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When to use it
Before writing each scene, ask who wants what in it and who won't give it to them.
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Prompt template
Review this scene: what does the protagonist want here, and who or what blocks it? What actions does each side take? Rewrite it with clearer conflict, shown through action and dialogue, not narration. Scene: [write here]
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Sample prompt · ask a chat model
This one is written for chat models like ChatGPT, Claude or Gemini: replace the ideas in brackets with your own and it will help you write the story or revise the script.
Check the scene below: what does the protagonist want in it? Who or what is stopping him? What actions does each side take to get their way? Rewrite it as a version with clearer conflict, shown through action and dialogue, no voice-over, short enough to play out in 15 seconds. Scene: the delivery rider reaches the bus station, the ticket clerk tells him there are no more buses today, he says thank you and leaves.
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Common pitfalls
- Two people just chatting and exchanging information, with no opposition.
- Conflict that's all shouting and arguing, with nothing concrete being fought over.
- An obstacle so weak it's solved right away.
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Parameter tips
Each scene has one clear thing being fought over (a ticket, an answer, a person).